taking deep ocean-steps
in the direction of you,
i breathe quietly
through the pores of my tongue
so as not to startle you
with my boldness;
hush of moss-draped oaks
and their crushing silences
keep vigil against me;
limbs are heavy and sodden
with my best treacherous intentions,
skin drinking the wet
from the air, drowning in the coming thunder;
for you i would dare
even the lightning.
the tenth muse 
deep ocean steps….
huge,
love it.
delicate piece.
love beneath the surface. Here’s my belated Pot Luck poem. Hope your week goes well
Wow, powerful and so well depicted!! You have a way with words my friend. Thanks again for linking with Potluck, your support means so much. Hugs x
@writer: love beneath the surface. exactly. thanks for sharing your link; will be sure to visit!
thanks buttercup, Jingle– hidden feelings was kinda the mindset; felt it fit in with the whole “masked” theme going on in the video 🙂 thanks again for putting this all together!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/poetry-potluck-big-bang.html
great..