because while some truths lend themselves to equations, others are best described in verse

inseparate

there’s a current
pulling at my blood,
teaching its pulse to beat
in time with your own, but
the rhythm of the thing
is just a little off,
leaving my guts
twisted and edgy,
a sound of adrenaline
in the inner recesses
of my ears;
that must be why
looking you in the eye
leaves me dizzy and off-balance
and in describing you
i find myself
more a doctor than a poet.

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2 responses

  1. Very nice.

    September 13, 2008 at 12:45 pm

  2. newcolour

    Very nice and deep. Direct and effective

    thanks for your kind words, newcolour. glad you liked it. you’re welcome back anytime. 🙂

    September 13, 2008 at 8:19 pm

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