In the chaos of raindrops and leaf-fall
you can hear her crushed sigh through
the smeared windowpane and almost
almost discern the lap of pale flesh
by dark waters, gasps uttered for a shadowy prince
from an untried throat, their echoes left for dead
against the cold of the floor;
salt stains her thighs and the glass while
smudged mascara runs down flooded cheeks,
her fingers groping for an anchor, a body, anything
to stop the inundation of her soul.
quite the visual.
awesome as always
Bindo
Very beautiful and reminiscent of my glimmers of rain.
Love the snowflakes falling too. Nice visual.
wow, i love the continuity… it attaches an energy to the words that they cannot have on their own.